lovely lighting. the skin tone makes her look smooth, and ready for a ride.
the dark jeans make her look extra dark, but sexy dark - a lot of people don't think of that trick.
i wish i could see more of the flower on her chest, but i guess it's better we don't.
altogether, a really nice shot. could be a cover of... something. very well done.
is it possible to make the pic less grainy? and uh, the lighting may be a little too bright, i mean when i look at the skin colour there's some form of inconsistency or something. makes her skin look burned in a sense. maybe softer light..
and can you do something about those few strands of stray hair her her upper arm? it's just... misleading.
but yeah.. i like the pose and layout of the model to the right.
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The "grainy" thing you see is "noise" it's what happens when your ASA(film sensitivity) is really high. In this case it was 1600. Like when you close your eyes tight and rub them, the little flecks of light are what the camera sees. Not sure why, something about residual energy bouncing off the sensors. Oh and lydia? your laptop isn't colour calibrated. So i'd imagine it looks very different.
As for the tan... yes, i happen to like girls tanned and the jeans were supposed to contrast with the bikini top. Contrast is the style of the whole series in fact... so it's good to know i managed to pull it off.
For a look at the flower, go to my scraps section.
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the dark jeans make her look extra dark, but sexy dark - a lot of people don't think of that trick.
i wish i could see more of the flower on her chest, but i guess it's better we don't.
altogether, a really nice shot. could be a cover of... something. very well done.
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What if....
and can you do something about those few strands of stray hair her her upper arm? it's just... misleading.
but yeah.. i like the pose and layout of the model to the right.
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SUPPORT POETRY! even if you never did like it.. try reading some.. please??
As for the tan... yes, i happen to like girls tanned and the jeans were supposed to contrast with the bikini top. Contrast is the style of the whole series in fact... so it's good to know i managed to pull it off.
For a look at the flower, go to my scraps section.
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I am a boy. Not till I have lived and died will i be a man.
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